Soooo … while sitting around anxiously waiting for my beta readers to deliver their concerns and dislikes (as well as what they love by hey, the others comments seem more worrisome) about my novel, I started looking/reading about copywriting. Though I would prefer to find an editor/agent, the world of copywriting would help with my ability to promote any work that I either self-publish or publish through original means.

Promotion is similar no matter what good or service needs to be moved. You learn about the wants and needs of others, then you find a way to grab their attention. You jump up and down, wave your hands wildly about your head, and scream out … Pick Me, Pick Me, Pick Me!!! Okay … Maybe there’s a little bit more to the job than that, but that is way they call them the basics. You have a product you want others to buy, you present it best attributes, and rationalize all the reasons that everyone needs to own your product. Simple … Right??? HA

There is a lot more to the basics of copywriting than that, but I have the time and I am need of a mind cleanser or two. Plus, I would like to learn to do something that will give me a sense of purpose… a way to contribute  and to eventually take care of myself and my mother. That is the dream. Weather we find a way to obtain our dream reality or not, the hope we climb towards each day is a necessary part of life.

What reality will bring you peace and happiness? Where do you envision your life taking you? When you look at your future, what do you see, where are you, who is by your side? Do you create music or portraits or words of wonder? Can you build with wood or stone or metals? We all have a dream, a need, a fantasy of where and how our lives should be. In order to get there, we all need to find a way to stand out.

The more I read about copywriting, the more this holds true. Finding a way to make your product stand out and be eye catching, the better. And the same hold true for novels and short stories. You want your book to cause readers to pause when they see the cover. You want them to devour each and every page, and then go online hunting for more. Basically you want people to be come online stalkers, waiting for you to give time another line or two about their favorite character.

With copyediting, you want others to read your advertisement and then happily buy, Buy, BUY! If something doesn’t look appealing, then you can forget about grabbing anyone’s interest, no matter the product. With books, I feel like I have a solid foothold with one of the basics. Before you can get others to want your product, you first need to know about it’s pros and cons. You need to know everything you can about what you are offering to others. It is impossible to attract interest for … let’s say ‘apples’, if you don’t know what they look like, what they taste like, or what they can be used to make … How do apples make your life better??

Books or apples … You need to know why the people around you should want to claim these things, own them, enjoy them … why do we need them in our life? Dang … now I want eat an apple covered in caramel …

Happy wordage, Tracey 😛

Okay… this movie was excellent. And watching it with a few hundred of your closest strangers rocked. The entire theater, all ten screens, were packed. My friends and I chose to see the film in one of the women’s only rooms. It was like horny old gals, hooting and giggling with every sex scene.  And yes, the rumors are true. The sex was there and in your face realistic. Any clearer and we would have needed see it a back alley sex den.

This movie is not for the faint of heart, or those easily upset by nudity.  At one point I asked my friend it we were actually watching an introduction video for nudist colonies. 😛 Poor Dakota Johnson (Ana Steele) barely had time to enjoy the feel on clothes on her back before she was *on her back* without clothes. And Jamie Dornan’s abs are well worth a look or three.

But the movie was more than just a how to guide to sexual education. Both actors brought the life. Johnson showed the new, fresh face of naiveté. It was easy to see how the character she played wanted to love this amazing man, and was willing to try nearly anything to be with him. The character was intimidated while holding on to her personality and humor.

Dornan showed the confusion and basic need for control that his character felt. I can’t wait to see how his character’s personality grows in order to keep the one woman able to touch his heart. Both he and Johnson brought the underlying story to life, allowing the audience to see the glimpse of pain and love. (Though reading the books will help every viewer to understand. Not to mention, it will prepare them for the end of the movie. And no I’m not going to share.)

Fifty Shades is a highly sexual movie, but the story is very clear. As is the humor.

Dornan’s character didn’t have many opportunities to drop a line of laughter into the proceedings. But he plays the straight man to perfection. Personally, I have read all the books and know that he will have more and more opportunities to show his humorous side. Though he will spend most of the movies to come holding his current persona. He has a different emotional path to take.

Dornan had a difficult part to portray. Most of his lines that should have made the audience smile or laugh, were lost because they hadn’t read the book. Understanding were the movie was going, and what the Christian Grey character was really like, helped those of us that knew the trilogy word for word.

Watching along with so many women added to the comedy. The shouted comments… (One woman yelled ‘me too’, after one of Johnson’s replies) … the hooting, the giggling, the outright insanity that happens when a room full of females find something sexual or hysterical.  If you choose to watch this at home instead of in theaters, I advise that you invite dozens of gal pal along for the showing. You can always watch it again later. (And you will soooo need to.)

Dakota Johnson on the other hand …

It was easy to see that she has a natural ease with humor. More than a dozen of her lines caused the crowd to burst into laughter. I will need to rewatch the movie when it is on DVD so that I can hear Dornan’s responses, the ones that were lost under the belly aching laughter emitted by the audience.

She will grow into a headliner to rival her parents. Even if she wears some clothes. lol. Dornan is also and excellent actor, but those abs need a show of their own. 😛

So if you don’t mind extreme sexual content, I say watch and enjoy. And for the love of mud, people, read the books… because books rule. Now I am off to edit my latest writing attempt.

Happy watching, Tracey

Window.. some artwork to enjoy… there is something about black and white photos with just a splash of color that pulls emotions into the framework of the art.

Harry Potter tried to kill my GRANDMOTHER!!!!

Okay. That’s a lie but also very close to the truth. There were no curses or spells thrown. No men with bad facial surgery running around. What she faced was worse. So much worse.

And I suppose that my mother and I should bare part of the blame, but really, when it’s all said and down, it was JK Rowling. Yep, that’s right. I am calling her out right now. it was JK and her crowd gathering book that nearly killed my Gran.

We knew going in that the trip was insanity, but I was new to the world of MS and still quite childlike. Mom and Granny were always willing to do anything, go that extra mile, if they believed that it would bring a smile to my face. That included a midnight run to the local Walmart for the latest Harry Potter. It was either the sixth or the last book. After so long, all I can remember are the people willing to go out of their way so that I was happy, and that we were together.

Granny was always willing to hop in the car and go. It didn’t matter if it was midnight, if the trip would lead to the other side of the country, or if we face an untold number of hours before we reached our destination. She was there. So it only made sense to pack her and mom in the car for a quick trip to Walmart. I had even preordered, so the wait would be short. Really, it should have been an in and out mission. HA.

Granny has been in my thoughts this week, as crowds for both good or ill have taken the stage. The Ferguson Riots and the Black Friday Sales, neither could hold my concentration as I remembered Granny’s adventure. We had left her near the front of the store so that she could lean on her buggy, watching the people hoover over the crates of books being guarded until the clock stuck twelve. She was content as mom and I moved to join those lining up at the back of the store, those sane enough to purchase their copy ahead of time.

I remember standing in the middle of my fellow Potter lovers, holding my copy and waiting for the man at the register to get the okay on his walkie talkie. Some people were skipping to the last chapter, looking for long awaited answers, as I bounced from foot to foot, dying to do the same. Instead I stood there with my treasure held close to my chest, vibrating like an addict, wanting to go ahead and crack the spine. A few of the ruder shoppers started discussing what they had found by skipping to the end.

That’s when I moved closer to the man with the walkie talkie, ignoring all chatter. As much as I was dying to know what the book held, I knew that I wanted the journey to last. I wanted to enjoy each page as I climbed into a world of magic. I was close enough to the man in charge for the chatty cathys to shy away, I was close enough to hear the new coming through his walkie.

Screams and chaos. And my poor grandmother was right in the middle of it all. When we were able to pull her from the crowds, Granny was grinning from ear to ear. “Everyone started screaming, and then they ran right for me,” she declared.

Apparently, the crowd was being held at bay, but one little old lady that was nearly blind ??? She was allowed to stand as close as she wanted. Unfortunately, she stationed herself right beside the treasure that everyone wanted to get their hands on. She told us that there was some girl in line that kept screaming for no reason. And just incase you’re worried that my poor, nearly blind grandmother was traumatized, I assure you that she was not. She even went to the midnight showing when the book came out in theaters.

It is one of many memories that I am thankful for. Memories that have the power to make us smile years, decades after they are experienced, should be held close to our hearts. What memory makes you smile?

Happy Wordage, Tracey

Dragon Con was … Well, I have never been one to start out slowly, to walk before I run, or sit through the instructions when I feel like I can already accomplish the task. With Dragon Con I almost met my match. 😉  It was an overwhelming crowd of fun, excitement, liquor and costumes. I loved all the sights and classes. But there were a few points where I knew that my MS was a problem. The highlight being my case of narcolepsy in front of my all time favorite author.

But as I said last time… I made sure to go to another panel that also had Laurell K Hamilton on it. And as a bonus, I saw Jim Butcher, as well. I love to write, and I love to read. So I also signed up for a number of writing seminars. The walking was brutal, and the hotel I stayed at was not at all handicapped friendly. For the most part, the Con-goers were a lively and welcoming group. Though my mother was F-bombed, and called Wheelchair Bitch, that was only two people out of more than 65,000. And this trip was all about fun, having and sharing laughter every moment that you could.

 My spending habits were definitely on board with the vacation fun theme. I must have purchased at least a dozen books while mom worked on her tan, only to continue the idea once we were at Dragon Con. I managed to find a few Christmas present for my sci-fi/comic loving kin, not to mention the gifts I acquired for myself.

But the beauty of this vacation was everywhere. Not only in the items that we managed to procure. We visited family, with a view of the inlet that was to die for, immerse ourselves in a culture that showed a freedom and kindness that is rare in everyday life, and walk through exits of arts and weaponry that is hard to find in the back woods of Kentucky.

More than ten days at the beach and I was being to feel like a native. Granted, a very hot and sweaty native, but a native none the less. The views were excellent, but the sand and sea water are not for me. That doesn’t mean that I can’t appreciate nature. In fact, I love the sights and smell that can be found in our world. I just prefer the cooler climate when conversing with the wild. ;P Next time, I want to go to Vermont, or perhaps I can talk mom into San Francisco or Salem, MA again. Now Salem is an interesting place to visit. A place that Con lovers would be able to fit in without judgment. On our trip to Salem, we saw animals welcomed in every store and costumes worn as everyday attire. It was like being a kid again, told to go out and explore to your hearts content. Dragon Con may be too big for me, but it is still on my top ten of favorite views.

I am not completely out of my mind. I pretty much knew that participating in something as large and fast paced as Dragon Con would wear me out. Soooo, I book an extra night at the hotel so that mom and I could rest while everyone else got sucked into the mindless, sleep deprived exodus, the morning after.

It was about nine at night, I was sitting (and yes, smoking) on one of the benches at the entrance to the hotel. I watched as car after car, unloaded their new batch of hotel guest. I had already watched that morning as cars came up to be filled with passengers, packages, and post Con Luggage. I sat down by this woman that had managed to become stranded, when she missed her early morning bus. She was about five foot tall and funny as can be. (Don’t freak out Family) She was traveling back to Vermont but the next bus wouldn’t arrive until five o’clock the next morning. Soooooo I let her stay with me and mom.

Mom of course came down to make sure I wasn’t about to invite an axe murderer into our suit. In this day and age, it was possibly the least bright of my ideas, but it felt like the right thing to do. After mom had me text a copy of her driver’s license to my cousin incase  of death, we settle in for the night. She told us stories of cons past. It was hilarious. She told us about costumes that she had worn or seen, and all the insanity that she had enjoyed.

My favorite story was about her Hobbit costume and a late night beer run. She had volunteered to rush out to replenish their liquid supplies, figuring that since she was so small she would be able to squeeze through the crowd . I was supposed to be a quick trip and nothing else. Sadly, my new friend had forgotten about the late night Zombie walk. She was now face with a crowded street of Con lovers and an extra batch of Slowly moving, decay covered pedestrians. Being small only got her so far. Finally on the way back to the hotel, she was waiting at the cross walk, when she hears this low demonic voice saying, “Get the Hobbit.”

Glancing over her shoulder, she saw a large mob of Zombie walkers. lol. Needless to say, she ignored the do not walk sign and ran like hell. 😛  Mom was half asleep at this point but she jerked awake, and laughed  right along with me. . It has become out most repeated phrase, but only if you use the proper tone.

Alright word lovers, I think that is enough for now. But one last picture to send you on your way. I can see an eye in this picture and I thought I would share what lead us home from Dragon Con. So beautiful! Tracey

Edits are the mountain that stands in your path, the one not visible while creating your world. But the voices say to climb on, each step is one step closer to your goal


It is really amazing what the mind comes up with, when faced with the task of editing. I knew that there were holes that I just couldn’t see, places that needed a bit of word spackle, or perhaps the combined effort of a bulldozer and some without. I thought that I was prepared for the reality of revamping and modification, but, as it turns out, I was sadly mistaken. Now I stare at the pages with well meaning comments and evil red marker and think that perhaps it would be easier to start from the beginning, to forget about this world, as I move on to the next with all the knowledge that I have gained from this experience. HA.